Vetus

January 15, 2011

314 full

Filed under: Updates — CanonRap @ 12:00 am

As a translator, it’s… interesting to think that the original author might be looking at the stuff you do.

Anyway, here is the full script of 314. All transcripts can be found here.



[The Story So Far: Ala Alba is on the brink of annihilation from the onslaught of the 4th, 5th, and 6th Fate, and the revival of Dunamis. Meanwhile, Negi is still unable to break out of the space between life and death.]


Page 1

[1]
(Nagi) Is it okay,
(Nagi) To leave it like that?
(Nagi) Negi?
(Text) Under the dominion of the void, will the words of the father resonate – ?

[2]
(Negi) ……

[3]
(Negi) It’s like there’s a haze in my head…
(Negi) I can’t… remember a thing.

[4]
(Negi) But…
(Negi) But I…
(Negi) I…

[5]
(Negi) I get the feeling that,
(Negi) I can’t just stay still, not in a place like this.

[6]
(Tosaca) Ain’t that right.


Page 2

[1]
(Tosaca) If you’re the leading role in the spotlight,
(Tosaca) There’s a ‘stage’ you just can’t step down from.

[2]
(Rakan) Hey, yeah.

[3]
(Rakan) Didn’t you,
(Rakan) Have a ‘rival’‘s ass to kick for when you got stronger?

[4]
(Eva) Furthermore.


Page 3

[1]
(Eva) You certainly have,
(Eva) ‘Comrades’ who you yourself swore to protect even if you must risk your own life.
(Eva) Do you not?

[2]
(Nagi) And,

[3]
(Nagi) Don’t you have,
(Nagi) ‘Someone’ who you have risked your all to keep chasing?
(Nagi) Someone you kept looking for?

[4]
(Negi) ……
(Negi) Comrades…
(Negi) Someone I’ve…

[5]
(Negi) Been chasing after…?


Page 4 – 5

[1]
(Title) Period 314 – Rebirth
(Text) Don’t look back. Face forward, and move on. You have many comrades with you – !!!

[2]
(Negi) Fa…
(Negi) …ther…

[3]
(Nagi) Or not, huh? No, not just that – it’s sounding more like,
(Nagi) You’re following in my footsteps, and looking to surpass me.

[4]
(Negi) T-That’s…
(Eva) Heh…

[5]
(Eva) That’s right, boy.
(Eva) There is a path that he [jp. Nagi] did not walk… one that only you can walk.

[6]
(Eva) Set out on the grey path.

[7]
(Negi) Master…

[8]
(Negi) Become one who would move forward,
(Negi) Even after being stained with mud.
(Negi) …Was this what you meant?

[9]
(Eva) Go on. My disciple.


Page 6

[1]
(Nagi) Get going, Negi.
(Nagi) I’ll be waiting up ahead.

[3]
(Negi) ……!
(Negi) I’ll be going,
(Negi) Father!


Page 7

[1]
(Girls) …!

[2]
(Sextum) Now then…

[3]
(Sextum) This is where we part ways, ladies of the Old World.

[4]
(Chisame) Guh… Keh…

[5]
(Chisame) Is this… it…?


Page 9

[2]
(Sextum) ?!


Page 10

[3]
(Chisame) Cough cough –
(Chamo) Wha…
(Chisame) Sen…

[4]
(Konoka) Ne… gi-kun?

[5]
(Dunamis) Im…

[6]
(Dunamis) Impossible – !
(Dunamis) Sextum… the Averruncus of Water, in a single blow…
(Dunamis) No – even before that, you were invaded by demonic elements down to your very soul, how could you have recovered from that condition…


Page 11

[1]
(Konoka) Negi-kun!!

[2]
(Chamo) Aniki!

[3]
(Akira) …!
(Akira) You…

[4]
(Ako) Ne…gi-kun.

[5]
(Luna) Negi…
(Luna) …san…

[6]
(Chisame) You’re freaking late for a protagonist…
(Chisame) …Geez. (offset) Yeah, you promised, but every damn time…


Page 12

[1]
(Sextum) I…
(Sextum) How…!

[2]
(Sextum) How dare you – !

[4]
(Master) Do not move.
(Master) Or I will crush your core.
(Sextum) You…?!

[5]
(Dunamis) Master…
(Dunamis) Are you betraying us?!

[6]
(Chisame) Master…?!
(Chisame) That Grave Master guy?!

[7]
(Master) Betray?
(Master) …You wound me. I do not recall ever being your comrade.


Page 13

[1]
(Master) Does the boy not have a plan which can replace your scheme?
(Master) I would like to bet on the boy.

[2]
(Dunamis) …Ridiculous!

[3]
(Negi) ……

[5]
(Negi) …Are you,
(Negi) Mother’s…?
(Negi) Asuna-san’s…!

[6]
(Master) If you continue to be careless, everything will return to nothingness.
(Master) Go on.
(Master) My descendant.


Page 14

[1]
(Girls) Waaah – !

[2]
(Haruna) Ah… the left spirit engine’s gone silent!
(Haruna) Our speed’s…

[3]
(Misora) Bastard! He’s just playing with us when he can turn the whole ship to dust anytime he wants!
(Haruna) I know!

[4]
(Girls) !!

[5]
(Quartum) Even the chase bores me now.
(Quartum) Let’s end this soon.

[6]
(Collet) Ah…
(Mei) Aaah…


Page 15

[1]
(Quartum) Entei Shoukan [jp: Flame Emperor Summon]!!

[2]
(Quartum) Now… without going as far as burning up your souls,
(Quartum) Let’s roast the lot of you.

[3]
(Takane) …Keh –

[4]
(Chachamaru) …!

[5]
(Haruna) Shit…


Page 16

[2]
(Quartum) Wha…

[3]
(Quartum) What was that?!

[6]
(Misora) Ah…


Page 17

[1]
(Quintum) Farewell,
(Quintum) Miss.

[2]
(Natsumi) Ah…
(Natsumi) Ah…Ah,

[3]
(Quintum) ?!

[4]
(Quintum) What?

[8]
(Fate) They are his comrades.
(Fate) My prey…


Page 18

[1]
(Fate) You have all just woken up…

[2]
(Negi) These are my comrades…

[3]
(Both) I won’t allow you to lay a finger on them!
(Text) It finally counts down to the fateful last battle!!



315 will come out on the 26th.

18 Comments

  1. “As a translator, it’s… interesting to think that the original author might be looking at the stuff you do.”

    Eh, really?

    Comment by Kurogane Shiroikaze — January 15, 2011 @ 12:28 am

    • If you mean “if he’s really looking at it”, then there’s that interview about J-Comi a few days ago (I think?) where he talked about English scanlations at one point. And the page looked awfully like Zasel’s release.

      And yeah, it’s pretty surprising, personally.

      Comment by CanonRap — January 15, 2011 @ 1:19 am

      • Ahh… if it’s the recent chapters, I’m not surprised.

        Maybe you can even ask him for clarification on terms! ww

        Comment by Kurogane Shiroikaze — January 15, 2011 @ 11:37 am

      • That’s a scary thought ^^;;

        Comment by CanonRap — January 15, 2011 @ 3:17 pm

  2. […] CanonRap's translation of chapter 314 is now up: https://vetus.wordpress.com/2011/01/15/314-full/ […]

    Pingback by RAW discussion thread. - Page 183 - StopTazmo Manga Community! — January 15, 2011 @ 3:00 am

  3. Really great translation. You get feeling behind the words.

    Comment by Rhyshaelkan — January 15, 2011 @ 3:33 am

  4. Thanks for the translation, can’t wait for its use in Naselare’s release.

    Comment by CurtLe — January 15, 2011 @ 10:27 am

  5. @Rhyshaelkan: Thanks!

    @CurtLe: No problem, I’m waiting myself to see how it comes out. ^^

    Comment by CanonRap — January 15, 2011 @ 3:19 pm

  6. Awesomeness thanks for the trans as usual, though I’m pretty sure that Dynamis’s name had a y and that Tohsaka wwas spelt like this… but meh thanks…

    Comment by Khagrou — January 15, 2011 @ 4:32 pm

    • I hope I don’t have to repeat this too many times…

      First, ‘Dynamis’ is pronounced ‘Dunamis’ (or dyu-na-mi-su, however accurate you prefer it). In the page his name was revealed, Nodoka sees “Dynamis” written on the page and calls him “Dunamis”. Dynamis is the Latinised form of the word. The reason I don’t use it is because the pronunciation can be easily confused. I’ve seen people assume that it’s pronounced like “dynamic”.

      Akamatsu used the correct Japanese approximation to the actual Greek pronunciation. “Dunamis” is how he wants his main audience (the Japanese) to understand it.

      And no, “Tohsaka” is written like that to avoid the double o’s – “to-o-sa-ka” which again, would be confusing to the average English speaker in terms of pronunciation. But that doesn’t matter, because his name really is “Tosaka”, or “Tosaca” as seen in-story.

      And @Evangeline: =)

      Comment by CanonRap — January 16, 2011 @ 1:15 pm

  7. Fine work as usual

    Comment by Evangeline 'Tepes Scarlet' Alucard — January 16, 2011 @ 1:56 am

  8. hahaha.. its confusing.. ( i mean the story not the translation :p)

    Comment by Edwin — January 16, 2011 @ 1:09 pm

  9. Thanks for the translation. Also I preferred gray on white, rather then gray on black for the website, it was easier to read.

    Comment by Rhonin the wizard — January 17, 2011 @ 1:42 pm

    • I wanted to try this for a while to see if white text on black would be a better contrast and so easier to see the smaller font.

      Comment by CanonRap — January 17, 2011 @ 6:35 pm

      • Keep the gray on black, although you could probably make the gray just a little lighter for a bit more contrast. White backgrounds are just so bland and sterile. Sucks the life right out of ya.

        Comment by quigonkenny — January 21, 2011 @ 2:36 pm

  10. Heheh, 3’s taking notes from Negi and blindsiding people with rocks to the face😀

    Great work, thank you to yous and Naselare

    Comment by Carect — January 18, 2011 @ 2:14 am

  11. Question: Gravemaster is kind of a pain for me to translate. Is she speaking in a more archaic dialect?

    Comment by quigonkenny — January 22, 2011 @ 4:47 pm


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